please find CV attached

andy

Being brutal your CV could do with some work, simple stuff like spelling London with a lowercase 'l' is inexcusable in the age of the spellchecker.

 

I'd also like to know a lot more (but not hugely more, about another sentence) about some of your positions.

 

Also avoid terms like 'I consider myself' - I might consider myself the greatest installer in town but if I told you I *was* the best it might

make you listen - could still be BS but it sounds more confident and more likely to be possible.

 

Anyway that's just for starters, good luck!

Hi Andy

 

Ive sent you an email

Being brutal your CV could do with some work, simple stuff like spelling London with a lowercase 'l' is inexcusable in the age of the spellchecker.

 

I'd also like to know a lot more (but not hugely more, about another sentence) about some of your positions.

 

Also avoid terms like 'I consider myself' - I might consider myself the greatest installer in town but if I told you I *was* the best it might

make you listen - could still be BS but it sounds more confident and more likely to be possible.

 

Anyway that's just for starters, good luck!

To be fair he could say he saw a picture of an alarm panel once and some co's will take him on Stu.

You did...

Being brutal your CV could do with some work, simple stuff like spelling London with a lowercase 'l' is inexcusable in the age of the spellchecker.

 

I'd also like to know a lot more (but not hugely more, about another sentence) about some of your positions.

 

Also avoid terms like 'I consider myself' - I might consider myself the greatest installer in town but if I told you I *was* the best it might

make you listen - could still be BS but it sounds more confident and more likely to be possible.

 

Anyway that's just for starters, good luck!

Tbf to the op its decent,granted hes not bigging himself up as the best installer in town but he may be,i know the cv writers like you to make out your the best in the land but i find that if you cant back that up in practice you will look a fool,hence why i may word mine different

You did...

I didnt ! I think I know who you are referring too and tbf to me he did appear to be fairly knowledgeable on here 

Yes I am and tbf yes he did.

Spelling is definitely not Andy's strong point his email address on the CV bounced

lol

Spelling is definitely not Andy's strong point his email address on the CV bounced

Not good,maybe a wind up